People under the sun
Come and they go
Living a life
They all say they know
Unknown hands
Hold them close
Tie a knot
Before you let go
Fragile as a whisper
Then it blows away
Dreams - useless scribbles
Erase them away
All these words
Forever they stay
Death it comes
Carrying forever away
Under the sun
We swam together
Pride and ignorance
We breathed together
Then the moment, it came,
We lost our sun
Tired old hands
We all became one
9 comments:
arre you toh are a poet. have you put these to music yet?
some of them yes.. but i won't create public or pvt nuisance by singing aloud :P
Death it comes
Carrying forever away
true ture...
loved it:)
Nice.. saddish but true... loved it except for "Under the sun We swam together" ....it sounds like we had joy we had fun we had seasons in the sun to me :S
Why does it come on 11th September? Any reason?
By the way, sahi hai.
Especially,
Dreams - useless scribbles
Erase them away
Then the moment, it came,
We lost our sun
Tired old hands
We all became one
@ abhu: haha.. thanks
@ divya: damn! now u know my inspirations :P
@ virus: oh.. sept 11.. coincidence my friend.. haha.. thanks anyway man :D
Amen . :)
I can i copy Paste virus' comment? :P
I loved those lines too..
thanks divs :)
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