Thursday, September 11, 2008

Circle

People under the sun
Come and they go
Living a life
They all say they know

Unknown hands
Hold them close
Tie a knot
Before you let go

Fragile as a whisper
Then it blows away
Dreams - useless scribbles
Erase them away

All these words
Forever they stay
Death it comes
Carrying forever away

Under the sun
We swam together
Pride and ignorance
We breathed together

Then the moment, it came,
We lost our sun
Tired old hands
We all became one

9 comments:

Red said...

arre you toh are a poet. have you put these to music yet?

another brick in the wall said...

some of them yes.. but i won't create public or pvt nuisance by singing aloud :P

Abhu said...

Death it comes
Carrying forever away

true ture...
loved it:)

Divya said...

Nice.. saddish but true... loved it except for "Under the sun We swam together" ....it sounds like we had joy we had fun we had seasons in the sun to me :S

Virus© said...

Why does it come on 11th September? Any reason?

Virus© said...

By the way, sahi hai.
Especially,

Dreams - useless scribbles
Erase them away



Then the moment, it came,
We lost our sun
Tired old hands
We all became one

another brick in the wall said...

@ abhu: haha.. thanks

@ divya: damn! now u know my inspirations :P

@ virus: oh.. sept 11.. coincidence my friend.. haha.. thanks anyway man :D

Divs said...

Amen . :)

I can i copy Paste virus' comment? :P

I loved those lines too..

another brick in the wall said...

thanks divs :)